Precious Birthday Gift Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

Precious Birthday Gift

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Precious Birthday Gift

A big surprise
in the shape of a mug
so artistically sent
it's you I want to hug
the cutest cover so neatly bent
thank you, dear,
for this exotic temperament

a mug painted so beautifully
so true you are most artistically
red roses and our faces
and one scene
from so many places
where we've gone to certain races

your most stunning gesture
causes my heart in rapture
if you were here
I will embrace you with great sheer

and as you know me, I certainly shed a tear

A big surprise
in the shape of a mug
If you were here, baby
I would surely give you a hug

© Sylvia Frances Chan - All Rights Reserved
February 2022

Precious Birthday Gift
Wednesday, February 9, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: Birthday,Tribute,Friendship
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My birthday was in November, but this gift arrived one month later in December, the package was thus sent through seamail, BUT I regarded this as a Birthday present and Christmas present, it has endured one month of travel, it came exactly on the 22 December and my birthday was the 22 November, I am very happy with this mug and till now it is still in the cupboard, a very beautiful designed mug, thank you for reading and for your feedback
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
MAHTAB BANGALEE 09 February 2022

that's beautiful and memorable brithday gift

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 February 2022

Thank you so much for your great supports, that means a very lot to me.

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 10 February 2022

Birthday gifts are very precious. No matter when you get. Lovely poem.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 February 2022

Thank you for telling me no matter when one gets, that really gives me a good feel.Merci Monsieur

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 10 February 2022

A beautiful wish and a beautiful gift welcomed with such love and gratitude. Indeed, a wonderful birthday gift....10

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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 February 2022

Thank you so much Dr..Geeta for your valuable response and 10.Heartiest greetings from the Netherlands

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Sandra Feldman 10 February 2022

Such a beautiful and heartfelt moment and gesture. That you, dear Sylvia immortalized, with an original poem so full of gratitude and love! Just beautiful! ! !

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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 February 2022

So very happy am I to see you here today, my dear Sandra, long time no see, that's certainly me, Your words do touch me dear Sandra, so preciously rendered and chosen, Indeed, I wanted to write this poem, once again greatest gratitude from me, my dear

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David Wood 09 February 2022

A gift you will always remember as it already has history.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 February 2022

Really, David? Has every gift a history? You tell me, Sir

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