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Khairul Ahsan

Prince Charming

I am not your prince charming, I cannot be!
But I love you, with all the passion that can be!
I am not the smartest man in God's earth,
But I have love aplenty, there is no dearth.

You don't have to be a petite model to impress me,
I have lazy habits, workouts are not my cup of tea.
If I do not have the perfect shape, to be a perfect beau,
Why should I expect a blonde, randy model in you?

Meet me, date me and see who or what I am,
A lover, a charmer, beauty's admirer and a fan.
I can hold you, mold you, unfold you wide,
Wrapped in pleasure, can go for a long drive.

11 August 2013

Submitted: Sunday, August 11, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, October 08, 2013

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To a nocturnal princess, a fairy of the dreamworld!

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  • Khairul Ahsan (6/24/2014 12:12:00 PM)

    @* Sunprincess *
    Thanks for sharing your thoughts on my poem and your kind appreciation of it.
    I am truly inspired. (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (6/23/2014 10:02:00 AM)

    @Aqua Flower,
    Thanks for your beautiful comment on my poem. I fully agree with you that 'beauty is skin deep...and the chemistry and mental connection is what makes it so so real.' Thanks for sharing your thoughts. (Report) Reply

  • * Sunprincess * (6/19/2014 8:01:00 AM) impressive write...I feel there is a prince charming for every girl.... and a princess for every boy....only some will never have a chance to meet....because they took the wrong path in life....I hope she reads this... (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (6/19/2014 5:11:00 AM)

    @Patricia Grantham
    I am so happy to receive your appreciative words on my poem, THANK YOU!
    Looking forward to read some of your beautiful poems too. (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (6/18/2014 11:31:00 PM)

    @Beach Girl,
    Thank you for reading this poem and leaving your appreciative comment here. I am much inspired by your comment. (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (5/23/2014 11:12:00 PM)

    @Heather Wilkins
    Thanks for reading my poem and leaving your thoughtful comment.
    Much obliged, and appreciate! (Report) Reply

  • Dash Black (5/9/2014 3:26:00 PM)

    Actually i was trying to re-emphasize your point on how people do put their focus on truvial things when falling in love instead of being satisfied by love alone just like the prince charming in your poem presents himself; with nothing but love. i hope that helps clarify my point abit. (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (5/9/2014 10:20:00 AM)

    @ Dash Black
    I really failed to understand what you've meant by your comment on my poem, except the last two words. Would you please explain a bit?
    I suspect, the comment could have been meant for some other poem, erroneously dispatched. (Report) Reply

  • Patricia Grantham (9/6/2013 8:29:00 AM)

    Oh I love this cute poem on real love. Prince Charming can come in many
    guises. He can be just plain old handy Andy, nice Ned, slow Joe or cute
    Nute (smile) . Whatever they are as long as they have love, respect and character a
    prince charming they will always be. Thanks for sharing this talented write. (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (8/26/2013 9:42:00 PM)

    @ Cassandra Jasmine,
    Thanks for sharing your thoughts. One need not be a prince to be a 'Prince Charming' to the 'princess' he loves.
    Every woman is a princess at some point in time. She awaits and muses on her prince charming even if he be just an ordinary man. To her, he is the prince charming.
    Thanks for your inspiring adjectives. (Report) Reply

  • Dash Black (8/26/2013 4:07:00 PM)

    This is more of a country with nothing but gold in the morning sun. A modern wright, well crafted to highlight suitor problems of today which are merely useless in the face of love. Great one (Report) Reply

  • Cassandra Jasmine (8/26/2013 2:08:00 PM)

    Beautifully written! As Payal Parande wrote, I don't believe that there's a prince charming either.
    I love how honest, sweet, and short this poem is. (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (8/26/2013 7:09:00 AM)

    @Anna Ottosdottir,
    I am very glad to see your comment and the way you saw my poem. A poet's spirit is very much uplifted when a reader analyzes his poem the way you did. I am truly inspired.
    Thank you! (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (8/26/2013 7:04:00 AM)

    @ Payal Paranda,
    Thanks for your comment. I am glad that you liked my poem.
    Yes, I agree with you that if a woman loves her man and be her princess, her man will automatically be her 'Prince Charming'. If both are sincere in their relationship and work on it, they will have a fairy tale life in this mundane world. (Report) Reply

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