Prisoner Of Heartland Poem by Rameeza Nasim

Prisoner Of Heartland

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In the dungeon
Of my heart
I have kept you
Imprisoned.
Entangled
In the chains of love,
You cry for freedom;
But I won't let you
Leave my Kingdom
That dungeon of heart
was visited by no one ever
You don't realize
O Prisoner
It is not mine
It is solely your Kingdom!

Thursday, February 2, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saadat Tahir 06 February 2017

nice light poem with a deeply romantic theme... liked

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Rameeza Nasim 07 February 2017

Thank you

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Robert Murray Smith 28 April 2018

We imprison our loved ones. Sometimes they don't realise that we are all imprisoned by love.++10

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Shimizu Mizuhala 30 June 2017

It is not mine It is solely your Kingdom! Who imprisoned us? We lost freedom in the ground. Thank you.

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Umair Khan 26 April 2017

A feeling of love exquisitely defined. Marvelous miss malhi

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Rameeza Nasim 26 April 2017

thank you Umair :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 March 2017

Marvellous expression on love and life. I feel the most romantic lines are..... But I won't let you Leave my Kingdom That dungeon of heart was visited by no one ever. Many thanks dear Rameeza, keep the ball rolling.

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Rameeza Nasim 11 March 2017

thank you for appreciation :)

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Chinedu Dike 20 February 2017

Absolutely awesome! Beautiful rendition of words to utmost justice. It's a powerful love poem Rameeza with its economy of words. Kudos and thanks for sharing.

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Rameeza Nasim 20 February 2017

Thank you your comment made my day sir :)

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