Prize Rings Poem by survi sharma
Prize Rings
I knew our end was near
the day we shopped for rings
I thought we were forever dear
but you were not meant to be
my king
that is a day of every girls
dreams
but, for me it was a cruel
awakening,
I learnt the hard way all is not
as it seems
and my life is my own for the
taking
the focus of my attention has
since shifted
and its crazy how closed off I
became
and now my spirit a new has been
uplifted
I can't wait never to hear you
say my name
from the moment I looked into
his eyes
the inner depth of my heart
began to sing
so I thank you for all your hate and lies
because they paved my way to
a prize ring!
Survi-Survi-Survi how have you survived withoutwithout the speaking of such a lovely name....iip
Beautiful with great rhythm and flow, we can always move onto better horizons!
memories will return time after time. but we must look to the future. a good read
As dark clouds shift away, prize rings come our way! Rhyming and sweet!
Thats a very natural one, you can be a very good writer...keep it up..and happy to meet you here
Good poem of positive energy. For every action has its equal and opposite reaction.no? Positively faing challenges is a good quality. Tense situation easily overcomes.Good content and form.
a ring in the prize and a heart winning saga delivered written so well and a great poem
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/13/2024 11:25:27 AM # 1.0.0.1119
This is an excellent poem with good rhyming and rythem. I like it very much.