Promise Poem by Brandi Vanorden

Promise



you promised you wouldnt leave
promised you would stay
but there you are
walking out the door

Promised that its not my fault
promised that you cared
but here i am there you are
so close and yet so far

Promised that i would heal
promised i would grow
but look at me
the scars still show

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashlee Vandyken 07 November 2013

It reminds me of my ex boyfriend. Our relationship consisted of mostly broken promises. Your poem is very good, i love it.

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Brandi Vanorden

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