Pull The Damn Trigger Poem by MurfSurf 13

Pull The Damn Trigger

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The deed is done,
You there! With the gun,
I say to you, with vigor in my voice:
'Pull the damn trigger! '

'Show me what ya' got! '
And with that, you shot.
And with that, he shot.
And with that, she shot.

No possible way to coexist,
No, stay, I insist.
Now here's a twist:
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Murfsurf 13 05 May 2013

This is my first poem. Please help me to critique it.

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