MurfSurf 13


Pull The Damn Trigger - Poem by MurfSurf 13

The deed is done,
You there! With the gun,
I say to you, with vigor in my voice:
'Pull the damn trigger! '

'Show me what ya' got! '
And with that, you shot.
And with that, he shot.
And with that, she shot.

No possible way to coexist,
No, stay, I insist.
Now here's a twist:
You missed...

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  • Rookie Murfsurf 13 (5/5/2013 8:27:00 PM)

    This is my first poem. Please help me to critique it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 5, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, May 6, 2013


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