Punishment For A Life Term..... Poem by Sebastine Humaemo

Punishment For A Life Term.....

Rating: 5.0


Hearing your voice I woke up
then realized it can't be
because Iam deaf

feeling your touch I tickled
then realized it can't be
because Iam senseless

seeing you cry, I reached to wipe
then realized it can't be
because I got no sight

when you starve, I wanna feed you
then realized it can't be
because I got no limbs

seeing you fall, I ran to help
then realized it can't be
because Iam lame

admiring you smile, I smiled too
then realized it can't be
because I don't kno, what smile is

when you sang under rain, felt am singing too
then realized it can't be
because Iam a dumb

felt your touch again and got tickled
I realized, this time it's true
opening my eyes I saw you there
sitting one me with someone whom you love

silly then I realized
you can't hear my cries for sure
for am still a lonely bench on this park
lifeless for others, though I got life
and my life is just for you

was it my curse to born as a tree
watered by your hands making me grow
guess falling in love with you
Is the mistake I made
because now Iam killed and shaped as a bench
to hold you lifelong on my laps
kneeling on my four legs............

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Miriam Maia Padua 23 May 2009

nice ideas shared...sad but with amusing thoughts... really impressive.. and....so interesting to read... makes me smile on the last stanza... 10++++

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Tess Macapagal 22 May 2009

nice one tine, , , like very much, , , meaningful........

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Winnie Angel 21 May 2009

rare piece..quite different and thoughtful...................i can only say its wondrful! ..

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Naidz Ladia 16 May 2009

this piece of yours is a beautiful one..this will go to my fav..this is improving dear, really improving..full of sense..the stanzas with 3 lines express different meanings from that of the 4,5,7 lined stanza..this is admirable, adorable and we can get lesson out of it..naizz

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