Quatrain 14 (Rewrite Life Script) Poem by Paul Sebastian

Quatrain 14 (Rewrite Life Script)



Bury past in Past Cemetery
Embrace the gift of today
Bringing along another opportunity
To rewrite the script of life's play

Friday, November 14, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life
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Daniel Brick 16 November 2014

BRINGING ALONG ANOTHER OPPORTUNITY - That is the key element which makes the re-write possible. We can't just subtract things from our lives. We have to add them too. This would a good basis for helping adolescents consider their choices, perhaps a grid from which they would eliminate some things deemed negative and replace them with positive things.

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Hans Vr 15 November 2014

beautiful! living in the present, enjoying the now in a wise way

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