Rain Poem by jerry hughes

Rain



It was blowing a gale and
pouring the day we met.
More rightly bumped into
one another.

The first thing I noticed when
when she tilted her head
to say 'sorry' were her eyes.
Deep set and astonishing.

'My fault...' I began to say
as we ran hand in hand
for cover - and a future
neither of us expected.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Miriam Maia Padua 03 December 2008

wow..very romantic story put into poetry....left a vivid picture into my mind of your first encounter.... and the whirlwind romance...love at first sight.....clearly described here....so swift and ended beautifully....

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Christina V. 18 May 2007

This is very nice work! Chrissy xx

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Alison Cassidy 11 May 2007

Darling, you are such a romantic... This is a beautiful story written by a beautiful soul and a fine poet too. love, Allie xxxx

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gone gone 10 May 2007

Jerry a wonderful love story....sings in the rain and in the sun..... Love, D. xx

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Lee Degnan 10 May 2007

Wow, that is beautiful! So dreamy :) Thanks for this! Lee

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