Rain Poem by Lipstick Casanova

Rain

Rating: 4.6


A single tear is born
From the corner of my eye,
Conceived in my mind, and bred,
To thoughts once known and gone.

Suspended in flight,
I watched it fall,
As everything around me,
One day, must fall.

I looked upward,
Toward the sky for help,
But the very heavens above didn't know,
For they just cried with me.

And my vision did blur and fell,
Toward the ground,
To watch the death of my lonely tear,
And it did mix, with the tears of millions -
Others that have asked the same.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jibin Joseph 04 January 2007

touchy sweet beautifully written peace jibin........

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Lauren Lanzel 18 December 2006

nicely written. you have really good technique. : ] -lauren-

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Brian Dorn 18 November 2006

Awesome ending to a great write brilliantly 'conceived and bred.' Beautifully done! Brian

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Melvina Germain 23 October 2006

Very nice poem and a pleasure to read, thankyou--Melvina

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Melanie Emiko 22 September 2006

Quite touching. Sometimes pain doesn't end after crying. But like a dormant volcano. Good write!

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