Rain Poem by Jim French

Rain

Rating: 5.0


From clouds
to soil
to rivers
through hills
over waterfalls
under stones
through sand
teeming with life
crossed by craft
burbeling
crashing
ebbing
flowing
in sea
to clouds
to rain
on
all of us

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

As this is written just like a waterfall I went down with it on a journey. I didn't really like crashing, but it was worth it to get to your last line. So descriptive, so beautifully written. Top marks Karin Anderson

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Bullion Grey 04 April 2009

Kinda formed in the sense of a nature study, with quips and turns, softly set.....Of course I am no judge of poetry..but I liked it. BG

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This is a refreshing down pour. keep it raining.

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Eyan Desir 25 February 2009

Very creative, well set up men. tht was beautiful 10/10

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