Laurel Vijitha

Rookie - 3 Points (13 feb 2000)

Rain! ! - Poem by Laurel Vijitha

I am going to the market,
to buy a drawing kit,
and lo! ! here comes the rain! !
my most favourite rain,
I love rain so much,
and in rain would like to have a lunch,
sometimes rain gives us pain, : (
but not at all in the train, :)
I wanted to buy drawing kit,
but now want to buy a rain coat,
I dance in the rain,
I play in the rain,
I have an umbrella,
and the princess on it is cindrella,
mom wants me to use it,
no! ! no! ! I won't use it! !
rain is so much fun,
and I love it a ton,
rain gives us happiness,
and makes us feel it's plentiness,
rain gives water to the plants in forests,
and even to dearest,
it gives water to plats of farmers,
and puts a smile on their faces, :)
rain is born in the ocean,
and lives in the sky,
but at last dies,
and goes back into the ocean,
rain is a wonderful thing! !
and it always leads me to the spring! !



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Comments about Rain! ! by Laurel Vijitha

  • Rookie - 185 Points Vizard Dhawan (9/5/2013 12:46:00 PM)

    love 9 for this poem
    nice and gentle touch of words
    imagenary is awesome
    all in all an enjoyable read (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 35,597 Points Gajanan Mishra (8/29/2013 9:51:00 AM)

    good rain, thanks, no pain no gain but it is rain. I like it.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 57 Points Noctiluca Scintillans (8/29/2013 9:21:00 AM)

    just the way i feeeeel about the rain
    beautiful
    thankyou for the lovely poem
    oh raining outside
    gonna go and get drenched (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 29, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, August 30, 2013


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