(02/09/1978 / San Fernando Valley, Los Angeles, CA)

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Rain Doesn't Fall From The Ocean

Rain doesn't fall from the ocean
Thoughts don't form in our mind
A completely true false notion
One could argue out in time

Thoughts don't form in our mind
Each is gathered as a crop
One could argue out in time
Or a thought is just a drop

Each is gathered as a crop
Thoughts harvest from the heart
Or a thought is just a drop
Ceaseless cycle of an ending start

Thoughts harvest from the heart
A completely true false notion
Ceaseless cycle of an ending start
Rain doesn't fall from the ocean

Submitted: Saturday, January 30, 2010
Edited: Friday, February 05, 2010

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  • bob read (2/8/2010 4:04:00 PM)

    i like this keeps you thinkin you have talent 10+++++

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  • palas kumar ray (2/5/2010 8:38:00 PM)

    Very interesting and different outlook indeed.One could argue out in time.

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