Analogous to Tower 7 Ameaning

Bronze Star - 2,142 Points (02/09/1978 / San Fernando Valley, Los Angeles, CA)

Rain Doesn'T Fall From The Ocean - Poem by Analogous to Tower 7 Ameaning

Rain doesn't fall from the ocean
Thoughts don't form in our mind
A completely true false notion
One could argue out in time

Thoughts don't form in our mind
Each is gathered as a crop
One could argue out in time
Or a thought is just a drop

Each is gathered as a crop
Thoughts harvest from the heart
Or a thought is just a drop
Ceaseless cycle of an ending start

Thoughts harvest from the heart
A completely true false notion
Ceaseless cycle of an ending start
Rain doesn't fall from the ocean


Comments about Rain Doesn'T Fall From The Ocean by Analogous to Tower 7 Ameaning

  • Robert Murray Smith (10/23/2016 8:25:00 PM)

    Rain
    The rain of the brain/mind comes in pulsating rhythms in a chemo-electric mind via glia directing neurons combined into thoughts alone under bone. Those thoughts are saved by others' thoughts.

    Your poem dosen't advance thought one iota. You as a poet have a mind that creates all your poems.

    Robert
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    Analogous To Tower 7: Ameaning Analogous To Tower 7: Ameaning (10/24/2016 4:32:00 PM)

    Only a simpleton assumes credit for true poetry. If a poet's mind is grand enough to make their poetry, then they are not making poetry; just trying to validate meaninglessness with hallow whimpering. Take credit for your own poetry don't ascribe credit to mine. I live it, not create it; it forms me far more than I design it. But thanks for you personal life's experiential insight.

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  • (2/8/2010 4:04:00 PM)


    i like this keeps you thinkin you have talent 10+++++ (Report) Reply

  • Palas Kumar Ray (2/5/2010 8:38:00 PM)


    Very interesting and different outlook indeed.One could argue out in time. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 30, 2010

Poem Edited: Friday, February 5, 2010


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