Rain On The Way Poem by Pranesh Patil

Rain On The Way

Rating: 4.8


Stormy winds and leaves hustling,
Dark and cold was the room inside,
Rain on the way, Rain on the way,
Sway, Sway, Sway....

Clouds of the sky wore black-grey shade,
Window pane shimmered a sharp white light,
Rain on the way, Rain on the way,
Sway, Sway, Sway....

Hustle of the leaves on the tarry road,
A mystical anthology had already begun,
Rain on the way, Rain on the way,
Sway, Sway, Sway....

Fragrance of the soil and the fresh green grass,
Some hot steamed coffee and blithe-full mind,
To wash my past and brace the present,
Rain's on the way, Rain's on the way,
Sway, Sway, Sway....

Tuesday, May 5, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jaishree Nair 05 May 2015

An ode to rain.Thanks for sharing

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Pranesh Patil 06 May 2015

Thanks Jaishree

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Uma Ram 19 May 2015

A mystical anthology..., Fragrance of soil...lively thoughts expressed beautifully. Thanks for your valuable comments sir, and thanks for the lovely verses shared.

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Uma Ram 19 May 2015

Fragrance of the soil...A mystical...awesome lines sir. Enjoyed. Keep writing...Thanks for your valuable comments sir. thanks for sharing the lovely feeling.

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Akhtar Jawad 11 May 2015

Fragrance of the soil and the fresh green grass, Some hot steamed coffee and blithe-full mind, To wash my past and brace the present, Rain's on the way, Rain's on the way, Sway, Sway, Sway.... A beautiful poem....................10

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Chinedu Dike 05 May 2015

Lovely sonorous piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned with insight. A nice poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. ➕9

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Pranesh Patil 06 May 2015

Thanks Chinedu...

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Kelly Kurt 05 May 2015

An evocative poem, Pranesh. The rain has arrived. Thanks for sharing. Peace

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Pranesh Patil 06 May 2015

Thanks Kelly

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