Shiloh Thompson


Rain, Rain


Rain, rain, fall today,
Wash away my debts to pay,
Cleanse me of my sins I pray,
Rain, rain, fall away.

Rain, rain, fall away,
Wash away the blood today,
Wake us from this dream I say,
Rain, rain, here to stay.

Rain, rain, here to stay,
Keep the sin of hate at bay,
Love is coming here to stay,
Rain, rain, fall today.

Submitted: Monday, October 08, 2007
Edited: Thursday, April 14, 2011

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  • Rookie Montana Hohensee (1/22/2008 10:27:00 PM)

    i liked this poem very much
    it sparked my creative side of me
    dosn't happen that often anymore
    but you can check out my poem
    there good
    and i think you would like it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Fane (10/16/2007 1:01:00 PM)

    Really darling, you are good.
    Keep it up - this poem makes one think. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Duncan Wyllie (10/10/2007 3:07:00 PM)

    Wonderful poem, cleansing, sobering,
    love duncan X (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ayn Timmerman (10/10/2007 10:30:00 AM)

    Good rythym. Try to find some workshops on poetics in that backwater place you live. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Daniel Ramirez (10/8/2007 5:21:00 PM)

    They say god is in the rain.... rain is the base in life.....rain... is but the drops of life.. rain... will always stay... in our heart and mind... rain we need it everyday.... so true... good writing thompson..keep it up... (Report) Reply

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