juwita ayu


Rain.Rain. - Poem by juwita ayu

rain...
let it rain. let it rain.
i can feel the sincerity,
the freedom i've been desiring.

there's no more pain: the hardness that kills,
all dissolves in the rain.
for the tears banished,
the smile is forever glistening.

and in its coldness,
i'm running free.
with rain pouring...
let me be happy.


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  • Rookie - 243 Points Palas Kumar Ray (11/24/2008 1:16:00 AM)

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    Rain.
    Rain brings great relief over sufferings.
    Oh, Rain rain.
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  • Rookie Krista Churchill (11/24/2008 12:48:00 AM)

    I love the last verse very well written...


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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 24, 2008