Raindrops Underwater Poem by Fondant Fancy
Raindrops Underwater
Rating: ★5.0
If I lie here
beneath the water,
very still,
hardly breathing;
I can see the
tension on
the surface.
Glassy smooth
reflections in
depthless tranquility.
Cool, transparent lair
perfect circling ripples
coil and intertwine.
Spirals loop and cross
each pendant drop
noted by perceptible
motion. Audible to
me alone....the sound
of raindrops underwater.
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5/6/2024 6:30:11 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Dear Berry, its a lovely poem with beautiful and poignant imageries with a deep and clear vision. Only one suggestion, you might remove that 'by' in L 16. A PERFECT TEN YOU DESERVE. RAJKUMAR