Raven Ozera

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Raining - Poem by Raven Ozera

begin again and break the bell
forget the thing you cannot tell
tried to warn you, ran away
just to hurt you again today
its fine, I can see the lies
that cross the mirror in my eyes
what happened then will happen now
I told you not to fall or bow
you didn't listen, now its old
tripping over this fools gold
tried not to break the thing you are
then I took it much too far
i'll fall into the arms of night
I've given up this fight


Comments about Raining by Raven Ozera

  • Rookie - 484 Points Adeline Foster (2/1/2014 1:13:00 PM)

    I like this one. Well expressed for someone so young. I even like the e.e. cummings style of no punctuation or caps. Read mine –Rain –
    Adeline
    Just a thought, last line could read: I've given up this forlorn fight. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 27, 2014

Poem Edited: Tuesday, January 28, 2014


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