Random Thoughts............ Poem by Vivek Jha

Random Thoughts............

Rating: 4.8


Wait for the sun to rise
watch the death toll rise
Gaze at the sky
and wait for the moment to come by

So as he gazes at the sky
Closes his eyes
Prays to his god
'Do not let them die
Let my brothers survive
coz if they should die
i wouldn't even cry
i'd just wonder about
why i am alive.......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

The question why? is a great starting place for purpose. Keep writing.

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Kesav Easwaran 24 December 2008

startling opening lines...subsequent lines keep the tempo up without losing the theme inside... as assassination of innocents all over the world continue like this, one really wonders how one lives in this terror gripped world...ten for your good write, Vivek..

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Deep Samal 16 November 2008

stunning little piece of introspection! ! ! ! keep it up...

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a thought provking piece.....thnk for sharing

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