Random Thoughts Poem by Steve Whitson

Random Thoughts

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Autumn winds brushing upon the pane like leaves upon a porch

Swirling and dancing their song of life

Days grow short and time stills like limpid pools of water in the deep cavern of our lives

We breathe as one rushing to peak as lovers; holding each other as if the moon would fall, the sun could die

We are all fragile in our own way. All meant to be together as one yet somehow impossibly alone.

(-2008)

Saturday, May 23, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: humanity,life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My dear friend suggested we start writing poems. This is my first.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 24 May 2015

Not a bad piece for a new comer into the world of poetry. A good poem, well articulated and nicely penned. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. ➕8

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Kelly Kurt 23 May 2015

Your friend recognized your talent, Steve. Keep writing

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