(reaper) -Haiku- Poem by ray Schreiber

(reaper) -Haiku-

Rating: 2.7


Low tide at the cove
snowy egrets slowly stalk
stranded lives in pools

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Walterrean Salley 25 December 2009

Let's see: At low tide, the hungry egrets are trying to catch some fish? ? ? ? P.S. Even if I'm wrong in interpretation, the haiku is beautiful and well written. Thank you for sharing it. 10

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Rachel Butler 08 November 2009

'Stranded lives in pools' Rachel Ann Butler

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Maria Barbara Korynt 04 November 2009

I love the correctly written haiku and with the meaning. Your so is. :)

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rago rago 04 November 2009

just fantastic.........................

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ray Schreiber

ray Schreiber

Mechanicsburg, Pennsylvania USA
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