Dónall Dempsey

Rookie - 43 Points (15/07/56 / Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.)


& in white panties

the artist
conjours up

my naked form
sprawled before her

ever attentive eye.

I listen to
the whisper of

her charcoal
telling its secrets

to the silent page.

'Sha...sha...sha...dow! '
it says sotto voce

whilst short sharp little scratches
produce the stubble of my beard.

Her eye
darts back & forth

back & forth
ever attentive.

I gaze at the beauty
of her breasts

swaying back & forth
back & forth

with every stroke

my image
taking form

beneath the magic
of her hand.

Topless &
in white panties

the artist
feels herself

drawn to me

until finally

she comes...kisses me

reclining nude now
with her reclining nude male.

Outside in the garden
a wood pigeon coos & coos & coos

above the sound
of many kisses.

Submitted: Sunday, August 10, 2008
Edited: Thursday, January 08, 2009

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Comments about this poem (RECLINING MALE NUDE(for Janice) by Dónall Dempsey )

  • Rookie - 0 Points Janice Windle (8/10/2008 7:54:00 AM)

    The Artist and her Model

    Soft charcoal touching
    where words cannot say how strong
    his smooth shoulder feels.

    With all my love
    J x (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lynn Rowe (8/10/2008 6:12:00 AM)

    Sensual, tender. A ten.
    Lynn Rowe (Report) Reply

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