Rectify Poem by Roselyn A.M.

Rectify

Rating: 5.0


07/02/10
i
High-sounding voice that deafens someone's ear
Offensive words are hurting like a spear
Intense emotions burst into tears
This isn't new, each one is used to this.
ii
Realizing from the start
Their visions in life are unmatched
From small things to impossible
They always argue and fight.
iii
How could anyone make this affair
A love that will lasts 'til the end?
Is it better to be apart forever
Or both party should create
A relationship that can give and take?
iv
Despite those repeated quarrels
They can't deny, still they love each other
But why do lovers hurt the ones they love
Don't they know it can ruins someone's life.
v
How many goodbyes should be forgotten
How many apologies must be forgiven
How many times emotions were shattered
Before both could change for the better.
vi
Hoping this may not be the last chance
Pick up the pieces and start a new one
Forget that soaring pride, mend those broken hearts
Live simply and respect each others side.
Do these things before one gets tired.

Before her heart hardened and died.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 August 2010

High-sounding voice that deafens someone's ear Offensive words are hurting like a spear Intense emotions burst into tears This isn't new, each one is used to this....... it naturally deafens and creates ill will some time.one should use kind words even if in anger and try to straighten out the things.. nice one.....10

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