Red One Poem by Jeffrey Regullano

Red One

Rating: 5.0


Out of a hundred roses
I plucked you
Red one.

Your sharp thorns
Are real
Red one.

These wounds
On my palm bleed
Red one.

Gibberish!
You are just a rose
Not love.

Red one.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Antonio Liao 20 October 2008

now i can see that Red is red... yet love is more than Red.... you make my day.... i like your poem.... a matter of reflection tells the truth..... wow a wonderful poem.. thank you... a 10+

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Duke Dolorical 18 October 2008

this piece is great, certainly is not a cliche my friend. congratulations and welcome aboard.

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pied piper 17 October 2008

You brought out well the simularities between a rose and love well. Well done.

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Jeffrey Regullano

Jeffrey Regullano

Zamboanga City, Philippines
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