Redemption Poem by Hanna Collins

Redemption

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Rain falls from above,
As if heaven itself were crying,
Mourning a loss so great
It needs to spread it’s grief around.

The reason for this deluge
A person forced to take their life,
Someone pure of heart and soul
That heaven now will never know.

Teased too far, abused enough,
Ready to commit the biggest sin,
Willing to condemn their selves
To an eternity of suffering in hell.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Santana Marasco 03 June 2006

Incredible poem Hanna. You put us to shame!

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Geoff Warden 24 May 2006

Hanna.......What emotion.......excellent poem

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Tracey Collins 24 May 2006

another well writen poem.

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