Remark Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul
Remark
Nowadays everywhere there is critical
You may feel somewhere in practical.
In betel shop or restaurant you may find,
Argument goes on there is no bind.
If you remark you will be on trouble,
No one will help, they remain as rubble.
See, listen, have deliberation and taciturn,
In any office work wait till your turn,
Negative remark creates argument and bitterness,
Positive may be negative if no likeness.
Srimat says not to argue with other anyway,
Argument creates wrath and divorces love way.
Negative remarks are not good. Leaf carries letter. Calmness is inside own mind. This we should feel. Soul is pure. Nature impacts on soul. This is a great poem and you are a nice poet. We should be careful.
We shall give positive remarks. Carefully giving remark is necessary. An interesting poem is beautifully written by you. I love reading this truly sir.
Argument creates wrath and divorces love way. A nice message.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/5/2024 8:40:32 AM # 1.0.0.1119
The poem raises a very relevant point. Unwanted critique or even advice should be avoided, but this is human nature. Amartya Sen's point about 'argumentative Indian is true to some extent.