Remodeling A House Poem by Hans Ostrom

Remodeling A House



We were after other forms, more light.
The house itself suggested other versions
of itself, faces within a face.

Rooms refused to add up. We
petitioned partitions. Shadows
fell against their will.

Blue meant one kind of life,
yellow quite another. Annuities of fate
sat in paint cans, quiet, unmixed.

In Plato’s formal heaven, two-by-fours
are Two By Four, grainless, ideal.
Here lumber rankles at our plain

plane geometry, gets nailed to the crosses
of our blueprints. We model, mold,
remold, remodel. And still we sigh.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chuck Audette 24 October 2007

Liked this - remodeling a house is one of the levels of Purgatory, I am sure. (Haven't I been rolling this wheelbarrow of supplies uphill forever?) line 12, possible sp. error - do you mean plan or pain? -chuck

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