I sway, and sigh,
and hope this wont truly be goodbye.
I wish, I cry,
till my eyes run dry.
I want so much to see you once more,
After we leave through that door.
I think that you will find,
You'll always be on my mind.
The hole you left wont fully heal,
As the pain, I try to conceal,
Until one day, I will find,
Someone else to dance through my mind.
For now I need someone,
to save me from
my restless heart.
A restles heart usually comes when you are young, so enjoy it, yet be patient. Good comes to all who wait. You did a good job with the poem, i like the structure and rythem you are very good. I give you a 10. I would like a young persons opinion on my poem 'I want to Live' thank you. I will also read more of your poems as time allows.
Hi Megan, this is very well written in that you easily convey how much you will miss the person who's leaving but that you know life goes on and someone else will be on your mind. And the rhyme scheme is fluid, too. Great job!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
So powerful and full of truth. Why should we have to dwell on just one person? lol 10/10, another favorite!