Return My Feeling..... Poem by RAVIKIRAN ARAKKAL

Return My Feeling.....

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The love I had for you
Is so prcious and makes me feel
Lonely, when you dont return it,
It lurks in my heart
With every beat,
I felt it will be duly returned,
Yet not so, I feel sorry for self,
If not full, return in part,
Be kind to me,
I yearn for the soft touch
Of your love feeling,
I promise you, I will keep it,
Till I end, till the last day
Of my life here, try somehow
To return as long as you can,
The moment of which
I will cherish forever,
Return my love feeling
Though you may be
In heart someone else's
Or your deep love
Is for someone lese,
Be kind for a sometime,
Return, please return
Part of my love feeling.

Ravikiran Arakkal

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 30 September 2014

Very touching rendition of a love not being returned, even though you are offering yours and not asking much - if not full, return in part. Beautifully stated, very gently and tenderly offering your love. I can feel a certain sadness lying beneath your request, it touches my heart and I feel for you. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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RAVIKIRAN ARAKKAL

RAVIKIRAN ARAKKAL

Trissur, Kerala State, India.
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