Revision Poem by Anil Kumar Panda

Revision

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I am the wind
Chasing myself to take away
Essence from your curls
Please be kind

I am the cloud
Appearing and disappearing
Within me to say words
Of love aloud

I am the thunder
That shines in your eyes and
In passion of youth will torn
Your heart asunder

Friday, August 4, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: dream,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 04 August 2017

I am the cloud Appearing and disappearing Within me to say words Of love aloud... lovely depiction with lovely theme. Beautiful poem, interesting to read. Thanks for sharing.

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Anil Kumar Panda 06 August 2017

Feeling glad for positive comment Sir. Regards.

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