Rhapsody ? ’: Descending Down To Hades Poem by Joseph S. Josephides

Rhapsody ? ’: Descending Down To Hades

Rating: 5.0


With no sunlight, the place resembles the Cimmerians’ land;
I walked the staircase down where they live in endless night;
a tide of youngsters carried me away to the gate of Hades,

to a bar, underground; I made with her a libation of whisky,
was alike a dead, other girls with red eyes approached us,
she moaned: 'they brought me as unburied dead; take me
out, stranger, send me home, let me be buried as human’.
I swore to buy her body for one night and then set her free.

'You’re a good guy’, said Agamemnon, a drunk customer,
‘watch out women; my spouse revenged me for my error'.
Client Tiresias foretold: 'You’ll reach your lovable home! '

Then, in a corner, I saw a pale woman same as my mom.
How come she is here, a maid in an underground bar?
In smoke and darkness she seemed dead. 'My child' says
'so many years, here, I missed you starving and suffering'

Three times I tried to approach but her shape escaped me,
a shade of a dream; inaccessible to hug her with my arms,
my words were birds she couldn’t catch. She lisped 'nekyia,
our bones are fleshes without nerves; the fire tames us all.'

Yet her soul was flowing as a dream and was laughing;
even Achilles, the chief gang of the bar, would envy her,
for he would like to live on earth a modest life as my mom.

'Son, return home, safe', wished me, 'my life is your history'.
Then I ascended the stairs to go find the smoke in the light.



© JosephJosephides

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
* This poem is classified as a short Rapsody. It is inspired by the Rapsody Λ, of the great poet Homer i.e. the descenting of Odyseas down in Hades. The poet creates his own new myth: he descends down to a basement-bar for amusement where he meets the same heroes (Agamemnon, Achilleas, soothsayer Tiraesias, his mother) and also (instead of Elpinor, who was left unburried) a young lady who is sexually harassed by men. In the end he takes the advice of his mother to leave the Hades (the bar) and go on with his sailing (mission) until his final destination, Ithaca (vision) .
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 08 October 2008

A nice job is done. Love it.

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Sandra Fowler 28 September 2008

An elegant piece. Richly original. Your poem ends on a very strong note. Ten from me. Kind regards, Sandra

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