~ Rid Of You ~ Poem by Ally Tenebrae

~ Rid Of You ~

Rating: 5.0


My bones tremble my body shakes
It feels as if the whole earth quakes
The cold surrounds me and freezes over my blood
All my feelings for you washed away with flood
The flood of emotion of hatred and self-contradiction
Im rid of you
Im rid of my addiction
Engulfed by the Black abyss was the water
The water that took away my fears my tears
All of the wasted years
You backed me into the corner
and said
'No one will morn for her.'
So your blood is my trophy my ultimate prize
Never will I apologize.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
~ Jon London ~ 20 July 2008

Great emotional piece Ally, ....when poems get written from the heart and speak to the reader...this is a fine example of how to create such a piece....keep up the great work best wishes Jon

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Pyro Fennema 10 July 2008

excellent poetry comes straight from the heart and not the mind. this is what seperates us from everyone else except a few ~Pyro the 1st

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