Rise Poem by Saurabh Walia

Rise

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Its about the steps you take
Coz they'll define the path you make..

And it is all right to break
After all world ain't itself in a proper place..

But after that despicable sleep you gotta wake
And put in all you got the serenity and the rage..

No one can slow your pace
Once you have decided to set your own stage..

Because in the end either you will be the one who arrived late
Or the one who tried and tried and.. wrote his/her own slate.

Tuesday, March 20, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: failure,fall,fight,risen
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 20 March 2018

No one can slow your pace Once you have decided to set your own stage. your determination is very powerful. so true. our decisions shape our lives.. than kyou Saurabh

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Saurabh Walia 20 March 2018

Appreciate you took time out to read my poem. Your feedback encourages me to pen better.

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Saurabh Walia 20 March 2018

Thank you for reading the poem. Your feedback encourages me to pen better.

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Rajnish Manga 20 March 2018

Its about the steps you take Coz they'll define the path you make.... //.... Extremely beautiful. Poem with a great message. Thanks.

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Saurabh Walia 20 March 2018

Your comment will surely fuel me to write better. God bless.

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