Rising Little Falling More Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Rising Little Falling More

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Child is crawling to walk,
To stand holding the wall,
He is rising little but,
He is falling more in floor.

To learn art of walking,
He is trying to stand again,
One day he will walk surely,
His effort is appreciated.

Falling down also in day,
He is not at all worried,
Dreaming at night again,
He plans to crawl more.

Crawling, crawling one day,
He will walk rising in love,
Like a dove he will fly,
Little rising will give light.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,06 September 2017. All rights reserved.

Wednesday, September 6, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: childhood ,learning,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 23 November 2019

Learning how to walk and talk! ! Childhood. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Muzahidul Reza 08 September 2017

Rising and falling deserve universal regulations in things and beings and in less spiritual state less spiritualities found, great thinking on the base of spirituality, thanks for sharing

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Akhtar Jawad 07 September 2017

Crawling, crawling one day, He will walk rising in love, Like a dove he will fly, Little rising will give light................... A child is a lovely teacher, he teaches to continue the efforts untill success. A lovely observation penned in a beautiful poem.

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Lamar Cole 06 September 2017

Very nice and delightful poem about a child learning to walk.

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Gajanan Mishra 06 September 2017

rising little but falling more. but let know no rise no fall. good job, sir 10

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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