Rising Sun Poem by Faiza Duale

Rising Sun

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Wonderful
I was wonderful.
You should have seen yesterday,
When it was wonderful.
Why are you on the run
Rising sun
When yesterday you were wonderful.
What are you afraid of
So I can warn the moon
For yesterday we were wonderful.

Rising Sun
Sunday, May 17, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: grief ,loss
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 17 May 2015

Lovely and well articulated piece nicely penned. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelly Kurt 17 May 2015

A wonderful and cute poem, Faiza. Thanks for sharing. Peace

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