Ritual Poem by Lorcan Black

Ritual

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Somewhere above an intercom crackles and buzzes-
the voice of God?

And these other bodies down here-
stupid and graceless,

vile in their proximities
in the dust and hot air.

Trains slam out of tunnels,
erupting and fleeting-
great, mechanical shafts
shunting out the hours.

Warm carriages envelope me
with their waves of light.

They feel like home.

This is the essence of love:
hands against the glass,
vacuum-packed against some foreign chest
and this strangled immediacy;
strangers sharing a breath.

One blink and the thread dissolves,
the doors slice open-

Ceremonial.

Thursday, August 4, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: anxiety,comforting,train
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Lorcan Black

Lorcan Black

Republic of Ireland
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