‘ROMANCE POINT’ [1]
esspeecee … [06.10.08.]
Questing the fragrance
Of dews,
On the sod
Where you left
Foot print.
Blind I’m
To view,
But will
Find that fragrance
Thro’ my
Acute sense.
But –
Alas!
You’ve lastly
Effaced
To take back
With you.
Oh spry
Dear,
Thanks for
Left fragrance
Of sod.
Happy I’m
That grass carpet
And nascent leaf blades
Whispering-
‘tis is your
‘Romance Point’.
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a surreal way of describing romance through the wonders of Nature..a 10 for this poetic wonder!
i felt as if i wanted to experience this 'romance point' myself! freat write!
And nascent leaf blades Whispering- ‘tis is your ‘Romance Point’. Just 1 word ‘Romance-intensified’ Ten+++ WR
Romance flowering, fragrancing, humming, imbuing, dousing and so on… Soft in tone and tune. Ten+++
so humble but sparkling to shine in the rays of the sky....oh! let me see the sprinkling dew in the eyes that chew.....my vow of great respect to the poem like you....so special in every lines my lips murmur...thank you God less... a 10 +++++
Blind I’m To view, But will Find that fragrance Thro’ my Acute sense..many ways to enjoy the beauty and see the way poet has expressed happiness over fragrance left behind... very rich presentation of views without violating the modesty....10 read mine anywhere....butterflies around... love at first sight....
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Happy I’m That grass carpet And nascent leaf blades Whispering- ‘tis is your ‘Romance Point’.' I really liked these lines sir.. you said it well.. nice indeed..10 with love shan