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Jen Capaldi (10/28/2009 10:28:00 PM)
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Romance point...... what a wonderful expression of feelings. a delightfully creative work of expression: Questing the fragrance, Of dews, On the sod, Where you left,
Foot print. the innocence of a fragrance that passes by your nose impresses upon you so signifigantly that it whispers to you ' tis your romance point'. we can find love and beauty all around us through all of our acute senses if we allow ourselves to remain open to all. a wonderful write.10++
Jen
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Wee Reader (10/10/2009 2:23:00 PM)
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And nascent leaf blades
Whispering-
‘tis is your
‘Romance Point’.
Just 1 word ‘Romance-intensified’
Ten+++
WR
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Rediffusion Effusion (10/7/2009 1:46:00 PM)
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Romance flowering, fragrancing, humming, imbuing, dousing and so on…
Soft in tone and tune.
Ten+++
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Antonio Liao (10/5/2009 4:07:00 AM)
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so humble but sparkling to shine in the rays of the sky....oh! let me see the
sprinkling dew in the eyes that chew.....my vow of great respect to the poem
like you....so special in every lines my lips murmur...thank you God less...
a 10 +++++
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Mehta hasmukh amathalal (9/30/2009 7:29:00 PM)
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Blind I’m
To view,
But will
Find that fragrance
Thro’ my
Acute sense..many ways to enjoy the beauty and see the way poet has expressed happiness over fragrance left behind... very rich presentation of views without violating the modesty....10
read mine anywhere....butterflies around... love at first sight....
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Anjali Sinha (9/22/2009 12:52:00 AM)
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wow romance whispering in the air
and on those 'nascent grass blades'
-10 anjali
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Mary Garcia (9/5/2009 9:16:00 PM)
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Very nice poem, romantic, coming from a wonderful soul.10+++++++
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Sathyanarayana M V S (8/19/2009 9:17:00 PM)
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I reallly enjoy reading your poems. They succinct in words yet succulent in content.
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Marta Umana (8/17/2009 3:47:00 PM)
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REALLY NICE POEM... YOU MAKE FEEL THE SENSE IN MY DEEP HEART
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Carol Gall (8/15/2009 6:15:00 PM)
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romance in the air and in a scent love this 10
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