‘romance Point’ [1] Poem by Dr. Sakti P. Chakravorty

‘romance Point’ [1]

Rating: 4.7


‘ROMANCE POINT’ [1]
esspeecee … [06.10.08.]

Questing the fragrance
Of dews,
On the sod
Where you left
Foot print.

Blind I’m
To view,
But will
Find that fragrance
Thro’ my
Acute sense.

But –
Alas!
You’ve lastly
Effaced
To take back
With you.

Oh spry
Dear,
Thanks for
Left fragrance
Of sod.

Happy I’m
That grass carpet
And nascent leaf blades
Whispering-
‘tis is your
‘Romance Point’.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shashendra Amalshan 18 July 2009

Happy I’m That grass carpet And nascent leaf blades Whispering- ‘tis is your ‘Romance Point’.' I really liked these lines sir.. you said it well.. nice indeed..10 with love shan

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Joseph Poewhit 27 July 2009

Grass and love do have a romance in them.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 27 July 2009

Very romantic. Truly poetic

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Chitra - 28 July 2009

a surreal way of describing romance through the wonders of Nature..a 10 for this poetic wonder!

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MKG F 14 August 2009

i felt as if i wanted to experience this 'romance point' myself! freat write!

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 January 2016

And, this is your love. Nice work.

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Katang Chakravorty 10 October 2009

And nascent leaf blades Whispering- ‘tis is your ‘Romance Point’. Just 1 word ‘Romance-intensified’ Ten+++ WR

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Romance flowering, fragrancing, humming, imbuing, dousing and so on… Soft in tone and tune. Ten+++

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Antonio Liao 05 October 2009

so humble but sparkling to shine in the rays of the sky....oh! let me see the sprinkling dew in the eyes that chew.....my vow of great respect to the poem like you....so special in every lines my lips murmur...thank you God less... a 10 +++++

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 September 2009

Blind I’m To view, But will Find that fragrance Thro’ my Acute sense..many ways to enjoy the beauty and see the way poet has expressed happiness over fragrance left behind... very rich presentation of views without violating the modesty....10 read mine anywhere....butterflies around... love at first sight....

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