Romeo And Juliet Poem by Sword Angel

Romeo And Juliet

Rating: 5.0


I look out of my balcony
Wondering if I can believe
Then I see in the distance
My Romeo walking toward me
I sneak out the house
And run up to him

Then he goes down on his right knee
He pulls out a big ring
Marry me Juliet
You'll never have to be alone
I love you and we will always be together
I'll be the prince and you'll be my princess
I talked to your dad
Go pick out a white dress
This is our love story
So baby just say
Yes!


~I am sill fixing it but tell me what you think~

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

WHOO! ! ! Great poem...but it just sounds like Love Story by Taylor Swift...you just took the lyrics. lol

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Ryan Thompson 29 October 2008

lol i soo happy for you :)

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xxxxx xxx 29 October 2008

true emotions expressed! lol like the real story, well done

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Jay Boyd 29 October 2008

its pretty good... everyone needs their special someone.

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bjanka im 07 November 2008

...how sweet those early, young loves were....I feel like a hundred years old...

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Courtney Groth 31 October 2008

awww...its so cute and romantic...keep going i cant wait to see what happens next! !

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Cherish Anderson 30 October 2008

AWWW DATS SO PRETTY! ! ! IT REMINDS ME OF ME N MY BOYFRIEND ROBERT! ! ! ! WHO IS IT TOWARDS? ? ? ?

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Asif Andalib 29 October 2008

It's just the beginning! True love stories have a long, long way to go! Best of luck!

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Khilil Perry 29 October 2008

It's great when people can express themselves like this and I am happy you found your prince I hope I find love like you.

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Sword Angel

New york city, Long beach
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