SINDISWA S. MNGUNI C'NDY

Rookie (24/11/1993 / kzn)

Roomate


A thank you to roomate
It's funny how I like doing things
but doing this just feels right
and I just want to thank you

Guess why i thank you?
Because of being you? or
for being a sister, neat?
loving, respect, listening, best cook,
quite, friendly, funny, comforting?
well are you done guessing? I say all.

I was alone at first
You came we were 2
Now you leaving umhhh...
I'm not good with maths
but that is a sad 1 I think.

Thank you for being YOU
Taking care of me when I'm (all)
Entertaining and putting me on track
I will never fail in life never!

Thank you for memories you've made
Thank you for comic every night
Thank you for decor in our nice room
Thank you for the new me
overall the Thank you, I love you.

Submitted: Friday, October 26, 2012
Edited: Monday, October 29, 2012

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this poem is dedicated to zama sibiya. she has been a good room mate and it is sad that she ahd to leave but i still love her and this goes to her hope she loves it.

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Ezediuno Louis Odinakaose (11/1/2012 5:12:00 AM)

    I'V NEVER HAD A ROOMIE...NEVER WANTED 1... THROUGH MY YRS IN UNIVERSITY NOW IN FINALS STIL DONT WANA HAV ANY...
    HEY LIK UR COMPOSITION REALY LOV IT, I'm not good with maths
    but that is a sad 1 I think... LOV DAT LINE.... WANA KNW A SECRET? ? ? I SUCK AT MATHS...
    UR WORK SO FAR AR SINCERE, OPEN AND REAL.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 27 Points Jahan Zeb (10/29/2012 3:24:00 AM)

    There's always something that change you and make you new. There you feel you could have done better if you had it earlier. It's never lost that comes at last. Well written. This is a nice poem to tell someone she means to you a lot. The lines starting from thank you tells everything. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,551 Points Hans Vr (10/26/2012 5:59:00 AM)

    Gratefulness is one of the most valuable traits that we can find in a person.
    We tend to attract in our lives much more of what we are grateful for.
    This is an excellent poem (Report) Reply

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