Mrs. Cynosure (May 17 1987 / Junction City Oregon)

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Rose Bush's Life

have you ever seen a rose bush
grow over a period of time
well it gets bigger and
a lot more complected,
as it grows and expands

it starts as a seed
and with the right care and time
it develops into a bush
but with the wrong amount the bush is not heathy
and may die

that’s the same with a baby
we start as a egg in our mothers tummy
with the right amount of care and 9mounts
we sprout into the world
young, healthy and a able body baby
but if we are not taken care of properly then
we may not live

a rose bush sprouts many different roses
during it’s life time
as if they are sections of there life
generations
of there life time

our lives look and act
like a rose bush
also it starts with one seed
you
then we sprout up and
make our own lives
with a family and
that spouts other things off of us
husband, wife, kids, and grand kids

our lives are like a
rose bushes life
for a rose bushes
are our lives

Mrs. Cynosure
Submitted: Tuesday, October 14, 2008
Edited: Friday, January 02, 2009


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  • Kesav Easwaran (12/27/2008 11:47:00 PM)

    very observant...meaningful write, Becca...good philosophy of life in soft sweet simple lines...10

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  • Sierra Love (12/23/2008 9:06:00 PM)

    Very Descriptive. I really enjoyed reading it. =]

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  • Rani Turton (12/18/2008 3:42:00 PM)

    You're right, the care a rose bush needs describes our lives, and the happy moments are like it's wonderful fragrance...

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  • Amy Ludidi (11/23/2008 6:22:00 PM)

    stages of life nicely descibed. must improve language use nana, otherwise sweet :)

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  • Saint Cynosure (11/3/2008 7:56:00 AM)

    So true this is Becca, very good work...

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  • Caleb Mckinney (11/1/2008 9:15:00 PM)

    full of symbolism :) nice :)

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  • Nichole Zang (10/17/2008 10:19:00 PM)

    It's beautiful! I love it.

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