Mrs. Cynosure

Rookie (May 17 1987 / Junction City Oregon)

Rose Bush's Life - Poem by Mrs. Cynosure

have you ever seen a rose bush
grow over a period of time
well it gets bigger and
a lot more complected,
as it grows and expands

it starts as a seed
and with the right care and time
it develops into a bush
but with the wrong amount the bush is not heathy
and may die

that’s the same with a baby
we start as a egg in our mothers tummy
with the right amount of care and 9mounts
we sprout into the world
young, healthy and a able body baby
but if we are not taken care of properly then
we may not live

a rose bush sprouts many different roses
during it’s life time
as if they are sections of there life
generations
of there life time

our lives look and act
like a rose bush
also it starts with one seed
you
then we sprout up and
make our own lives
with a family and
that spouts other things off of us
husband, wife, kids, and grand kids

our lives are like a
rose bushes life
for a rose bushes
are our lives


Comments about Rose Bush's Life by Mrs. Cynosure

  • Rookie - 87 Points Kesav Easwaran (12/27/2008 11:47:00 PM)

    very observant...meaningful write, Becca...good philosophy of life in soft sweet simple lines...10 (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Sierra Love (12/23/2008 9:06:00 PM)

    Very Descriptive. I really enjoyed reading it. =] (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 118 Points Rani Turton (12/18/2008 3:42:00 PM)

    You're right, the care a rose bush needs describes our lives, and the happy moments are like it's wonderful fragrance... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Amy Ludidi (11/23/2008 6:22:00 PM)

    stages of life nicely descibed. must improve language use nana, otherwise sweet :) (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 668 Points Saint Cynosure (11/3/2008 7:56:00 AM)

    So true this is Becca, very good work... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Caleb Mckinney (11/1/2008 9:15:00 PM)

    full of symbolism :) nice :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 14, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, January 2, 2009


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