Rubaiyat - Unfair Game Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Rubaiyat - Unfair Game

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Had it been healthy competition, he wouldn’t have mind,
Had he played fair games, he would have called it fine.
He was planning for back-stabbing, slander and malign
That really hurt him as he left him all alone to be fine.

Monday, October 26, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: friendship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
T Rajan Evol 28 October 2015

Very unfair game very well written.........10+++

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Sanjukta Nag 27 October 2015

Life is unfair sometimes, so is friendship. Great write.10+

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Loke Kok Yee 27 October 2015

all's fair in love and war Thanks Asim-10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 October 2015

Well done. Beautiful poem.

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M Asim Nehal 27 October 2015

Thx Much Sir

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Gajanan Mishra 26 October 2015

left him all alone to be fine, loneliness is necessary in dreams..

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