Rusted Rails Poem by Meredith Ogburn

Rusted Rails



Four feet, eight-and-a-half inches
The two beams split apart
She had gone off her hinges
Her mind tore her apart

Her mind was destructive
It poisoned every thought
Her happiness was deducted
Depression she then fought

She lived inside a body
With a stomach bulging out
No wonder she was nobody
She was ugly inside out

She often thought of suicide
It was the ticket out
She was ready to say goodbye
Although the words never left her mouth

Many words of sorrow
Were written on her arms
No happiness to borrow
She caused her body harm

She laid between the beams
And tightly clinched her heart
She said 'I'm sorry I'm me…'
And the train did it's part.

THE END.

Rusted Rails
Sunday, January 18, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: depression
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Depressed; self hate; suicidal; I write poems to regulate my emotions.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fabrizio Frosini 19 January 2015

your 1st poem.. Welcome Meredith! Verses filled with a bleak anguish.. a deep pain.. 'She had gone off her hinges /Her mind tore her apart // And the train did it's part.' Your note/interpretive key explains very well the theme of the poem, but I find your lyric really well penned. You're very good. Keep on writing poetry! And thanks for sharing.

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