Sad Poems Poem by Marilyn Lott

Sad Poems

Rating: 3.5


I read the sadness in your lines
They make me want to cry
I wish for peace for you, my friend
I wish you didn’t want to die

If only sunshine could open up
And fill your life with good
If only I could give you hope
I would do it if I could!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nikunj Sharma 29 December 2009

What a poem, rich with emotions and feelings for a friend. written in a simple fashion, I liked the phrase ' If only sunshine could open up '...deep meaning here and great connection with life in these lines

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Marilyn Lott

Marilyn Lott

Washington state USA
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