Sanctuary Poem by Charcoal Bullet

Sanctuary

Rating: 5.0


Freedom will twitch as trigger
Proclaiming pain of happiness
And only thousands of my lines
Will not colonize on my hands...

It too routine to memorize
The life as before and after
In a structure of each - there is
a kernel
My was already divided into parts...

Unexpectedly to become the toy of time
To be lost into a loss…
Forgetting terms and edges
I become sure
that I not I…

Death will smoke a stranger
dreams
And will wash down glass of
dry hopes...
We remained simply not needed
as well as before - between
light and darkness

And then walls will
collapse on us
Because they waited rights
To say the word too long
In reply to our prayers...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 08 March 2009

Unique context with a common theme, stunning composition woven with fine poetic language.........10

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Sid John Gardner. 08 March 2009

Keep going mate.The more you have contact with Native English speakers so willyour grasp of the language progress.Best of luck to you. Duss Vadanya Tavarish... Sid.

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