Santa Claus Honking Poem by Ludovik Celaj

Santa Claus Honking



Now that Xmas and
new year are near
waitting for midnight pray
and counting on a number.

A piramyd green tree
and where do i find thee
fastest deer collection
for new design carousel
on santa claus rotation
around the milky way
dominion star expansion.

Dec.6.2012

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december 6.2012*
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it's the saint Nicholas day (also knowan as the santa claus)
good
Novlette PassleyNEW312 days agogreatComment 0

december 6.2012*

Ludovik CelajNEW418 days agoit's the saint Nicholas day (also knowan as the santa claus) Comment +1

nice

Saroj KhanNEW418 days agoniceComment +1

spelling errors
Zach JonesNEW418 days agoand I don't know what direction you are taking? Comment 0

Some interesting imagery but
David KassNEW418 days agoneither the direction of this or the message are clear and your mispellings why did you do that it seems without purpose to me.Comment
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Ludovik CelajNEW418 days agoarticulating a complex of hollyday events and expressed in a poetical way to be understood from the readers with similiarities in acknowledgment
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