Just a few doubts to make one sure.
Just a few mistakes to make one regret.
Just a few memories to make one forget.
So many issues to block one's acts.
So many scars to mark one's soul.
So many lies to remind one's past.
A hundred thoughts but just one head.
A thousand pictures to a single mind.
A million feelings in just one heart.
Uncountable emotions like sadness and violence.
Unconscious postures of self indulgence.
Unbearable screams culminating in silence.
I love the third stanza the best! I think that gives the ssence of the poem! Hugs, Dee
A very great poem. Especially A million feelings in just one heart. Very nice
and i love the last line..if these are your first fruits i'm really looking forward to more
Awesome! You should write more. A good piece. Wish you all the best.Take care.
cool. i never seen a poem written so good by kind of repeating itself. good job.
beautiful. a good effort to capture the echoe and sounds of silence. keep writing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
So many ideas in one single poem-really excellent.