Sea And Sea-Shore Poem by Bharati Nayak

Sea And Sea-Shore

Rating: 5.0


You are the ocean, endless

I am but a tiny grain of sand

After being bathed countless times

By your great tides

Still wait for

Another countless baths.



Each tide

Like a dream

Attracts me to its heart

But, every time

I am thrown back

To the shore of day's reality.



My soul expands

To billions and billions sandgrains

Uniting with them

I become the sea-shore

Then I take your endlessness

In my embrace.

Monday, July 9, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: eternity,love,sea
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 30 July 2018

This is easily and quickly recognized as a Bharati poem! ! ! It is intelligent, it is full of sensitive and memorable imagery and it is a valuable read! 10+++++++++++++++++++ and on my fav list

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Bharati Nayak 30 July 2018

Hi Susan Williams, Like your poems, your comments are always inspiring.Many many thanks for reading my poems and your invaluable words.

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Mahtab Bangalee 19 July 2018

O Dear Sea look- I'm your Sea-Shore I did not love you to decay; to devastate myself my love since your birth O' Sea is true and eternal and eternally you and me shall alive together years after year.! //// excellent eternal love through SEA and SEA-SHORE

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Bharati Nayak 30 July 2018

Thank you Mahtab Bangalee for your beautiful comment.

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Valsa George 18 July 2018

The sea and shore have a mystic union from time immemorial! It is ecstatic for the shore to lie cradled by the waves, hearing their sweet lullaby! From a grain of sand you have grown into the vast sea strand! This growth is phenomenal! The sea symbolizes enormity.... so also the sea shore! A great poem!

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Bharati Nayak 30 July 2018

Thank you Madam Valsa George for your lovely comment.Yes , sea is symbol of immensity and it is ta wonder of creation of God.

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tom billsborough 18 July 2018

This poem expresses so brilliantly our union with the sea and its tides and the linkage to dreams touches my soul.

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Bharati Nayak 30 July 2018

Thank you Tom Billsborough for reading my poems and kindly giving your valuable comments.

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Glen Kappy 14 July 2018

Hi, Bharati! I hope this finds you well. Giving voice to the seashore and sea as you do in this poem is an excellent concept. Cool! -Glen

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Bharati Nayak 14 July 2018

Thank you Glen Kappy for your lovely comment.I feel so happy.

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