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Eyan Desir (caribbean)
Sea of Hate!
Monster! he took the life
waters from her heart
on the coral reef
vessels of his sweet crimes rest.
With a vindictive rage
a vicious tidal wave
over flows my heart's gate
The sea of love is dead!
it has been contaminated
with waters of hatred
With the might of a hurricane!
and a destructive blade
my sea comes to make
the vines from his heart
Don't asked for mercy!
the sea of love is dead!
It's time to meet your maker
go to hell with your prayers!
Play with fire and get burned!
provoking a mortal soul
means invoking its evil
and unleashing demons
Living in its chest!
Buckets of laughter
escapes from my mouth
as the sea of hate
smashes! the light from his heart
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nice pace to your poem
keep up the rhythm and good work
my sea comes to make
the vines from his heart
M
ah..i love the fresh smell of vengence in the morning :) this poem actually made me want to slap that other man upside the head. i have been in this girls spot one too many times in my short lifetime, and this piece gave me a strange satisfaction when i read it....scary lol well good write as usual.10
'The sea of love is dead!
it has been contaminated
with waters of hatred'...
liked this stanza more...well, how can love thrive in the dead (hatred) sea?
good poem...very much emotionally expressive
this one is intersting, and that is all i can seem to say about it
this piece is expressing strong emotion or expresses hard feelings...nicely done.expresssive...
this is the most amazing wonderufl well expressed beautifully evil poem i have read in an extremely long time. it's refreshing, let me tell. i love the way you make the words fit together, like life's just one big puzzle and ur putting it together. love it.