Treasure Island

Eyan Desir

(caribbean)

. A special flower....♥ ..............(love)


Every once in a while
The beholder casts
A special wish
And a flower is created

For every day that comes.
This flower glows lovelier

With every breath it takes
Earth seems a little brighter

For with every sunrise
A heart becomes happier

With every breath it takes
The air seems sweeter

For every time my eyes see
This flower blossom
It's a miracle and privilege
To be in its presense

Every time I touch this flower
I appreciate living

For I 'm grateful for being alive
When you are my special flower.


All rights Eyan desir 30th Sep 2009

Submitted: Friday, October 02, 2009
Edited: Monday, January 18, 2010

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  • Vandavasu Vittal (3/4/2010 5:15:00 AM)

    I witnessed the rain of moments
    That provoked me to think again
    in mystic houses we are tenants
    Willingly or unwillingly, love is slain

    Education has thought us everything,
    Everything but love,
    The tune divine to sing,
    Reaching from above.

    Bearing love with care
    Actually forsaking it gently
    Making love so bare
    Fictionally picturing it bluntly

    As flowers bloom
    It seems soon
    Love will prevail
    Undoing the wail (Report) Reply

  • Ihab Marzouk (11/5/2009 6:32:00 PM)

    As I suppose, you are so much great at using the suitable words while writing.
    I have considered the flower as a person that I began to have feelings for and it was a strange sensibility that occured in the deaper place in my heart.
    I do thank you very well.
    I promised myself I would, if God permits it, read a poem in a day.
    I'm here. I'm honoured if you want to have a conversation. (Report) Reply

  • Ihab Marzouk (11/5/2009 6:31:00 PM)

    As I suppose, you are so much great at using the suitable words while writing.
    I have considered the flower as a person that I began to have feelings for and it was a strange sensibility that occured in the deaper place in my heart.
    I do thank you very well. (Report) Reply

  • Ben Gieske (10/31/2009 4:40:00 PM)

    I love flowers too and they can bring us great joy. I hope that you have a whole garden of flowers. Their blossoms don't last too long. Perhaps the thought will linger even though the blossom fades away or a poem such as yours is left in their place. (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/13/2009 6:05:00 PM)

    For every time eyes see
    This flower blossom
    It's a miracle and privilege
    To be in its presents..............it is lovely to be in its presents and eyes tryto see it blossom... lovely creation and i loved it.....10

    read mine...plege....should we die....no where to go...beauty (Report) Reply

  • Premila Patel (10/9/2009 6:03:00 PM)

    Simply lovely...that flower must not be taken for granted...Just like life its short love and appreciate it.......xxx
    10+++
    Well done Eyan (Report) Reply

  • Marieta Maglas (10/9/2009 2:35:00 PM)

    wonderful visual metaphor:
    ''For every time I appreciate living
    I remember you are that special flower''
    excellent symbolistic poem, lovely to read.....10+++++++++ (Report) Reply

  • Corey Threet (10/9/2009 12:12:00 PM)

    Wow beautiful poem really heartfelt and thoughtful. Really nice thanks for sharing and remember. Spread Yourself! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Kirsty Kirkham (10/8/2009 6:33:00 PM)

    hi, its ok i havnt read your others yet, but i will later on tomorrow and give you my opinion then, i like to read them all first and then give a comment if that is ok with you, and maybe you can read afew of mine when i post them and tell me your thoughts x (Report) Reply

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