Second Generation (Senryu) Poem by Govind Ramakrishnan

Second Generation (Senryu)



in grandma's mirror
i see many hopes and dreams~~
lived through her grandkids

© 2016

Tuesday, July 19, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: family
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Guru Kothandaraman 20 July 2016

Written with great feeling and a sense of being! Well done young man.

24 12 Reply
Gil Highlander 20 July 2016

Govind this is a wonderful Senryu, it's not just an Asian framework, many grand parents live through their grand kids, even in Anglo-Saxon families like mine.

24 12 Reply
Stephen Park 20 July 2016

This is a beautiful poem. I loved it very much.

25 12 Reply
Kelly Kurt 19 July 2016

An ideal Senryu. I'm sure you make your grandmother proud

26 13 Reply

Thank you sir. More importantly, I am proud of her.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 19 July 2016

Typica Asian extended family scenario. Excellent write. Thanks for sharing.

28 13 Reply

Thank you for your kind words. It is true all around the world not just with Asian families.

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